Emotion Writing with Year 1

Emotions are something we feel all the time but we cannot see or touch. We tried to make the way we experience emotions come alive to others through our writing. 

We read a story and brainstormed some of the feelings in the story. 

We then took one of these emotions and wrote a poem together.

Disappointment is pale green.

It looks like the losing team.

Disappointment sounds like a whinging child.

It feels cold and slimy.

Burnt baking smells disappointing.

It tastes like stale chocolate.

We are now working on our own poems and will publish them on the computer.

Watch this space!

Who or What am I?

A group of gorgeous young writers have been working on some writing to share.

We looked at other author's examples of 'who am I' clues and then tried to write our own. We tried to trick our readers into thinking our who am I was in fact something else.

When we had finished our writing we put our work into keynote which is like powerpoint. We then cut our pictures into pieces to go with our clues. We added transitions to make things zoom in and out of our movie.

When we finished the teachers made them into movies.

They look very good and we are feeling proud of our work.

Bella

Caleb

Emma

Estella

Jacob

Libby

Maddie

Olivia

Rosie

Ruby

Thesara

Robert

Niamh

Lachlan

Aliana