Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Year 2 Writers

This week some amazing Year two writers are working together and exploring their thoughts about colour. On Tuesday we brainstormed our thoughts and ideas about colour. Next time we know that is important to group ideas together when you record them.


Next we will use our ideas to create some colour poems.

Watch this space!

Thanks to Estella, Bella, Abbie, Rosie, Catherine, Lachie, Caleb, Luca, Aliana, Lauren, Samantha, Oliver, Jake, Thesara, and Olivia for their hard work and great ideas.

We tried hard to paint pictures with words and this was harder than we thought.


Blue
Blue pens writing
Planets floating around in the atmosphere
Night skies with dazzling stars.
Blue slides coming from steep places.
Blue buildings almost touching the sky.
Blue birds fluttering.
Tears pouring from blue eyes.
Shimmering oceans filled with water life creatures.

Jake

Purple
A shining plum
A clean violet in the sun,
An eggplant for my Mum,
And Dad.
Beautiful grapes for me to eat,
Purple puffles for you and me.
Purple around us is all I see.

Rosie


Silver
Silver is sparkly
Silver is like the lovely breeze.
There is silver, second place.
Silver is pearls on your wrist.



Catherine


White
Fluffy clouds in the sky.
The moon is sleeping in space
Houses made of new wood.
Rooves on top of houses.
Milk is for drinking.
Pools are for swimming
Dresses are for wearing.

Samantha

Silver
A necklace dangling down
Glass cabinents in the sun.
Coming second in a race.
Spoons, knives, forks.
Toasty machine tops
The inside of a big heater.
Fridges getting opened.
Hard stiff metal.
Rings lacing on fingers.
Machinery made to be fixed.
Buckles on shoes.
Disgusting silver fillings
Pipes getting fixed.

Abbie

Red
Apples shining in the sun.
Fire trucks racing to help
Stop signs keeping us safe.
Teachers writing
Signs telling us not to go in.
It is the colour of lips and
You lungs and tongue.
Roses shimmering in the warm light.
Stars on the NZ flag.
Christmas present giver’s coat.
Sometimes the evening sky setting.
Covering us with love.

Aliana

Green
Lettuce growing happily in the garden.
Slimy, gooey frogs.
A grasshopper leaping from leaf to leaf.
Lilypads floating away
A bean pod hanging on its stalk
Crocodiles snapping teeth
A kea swooping
Moss climbing onto a tree
A shiny green apple.

Bella

Yellow
Yellow is a happy colour
Sunshine
Medals for coming first
Crowns, stars, baby chicks.
Shiny money, bananas
The Simpsons.
Duty teacher’s jackets
Bright daffidols
Drinking juice
Pineapple
The third colour in the rainbow.

Estella

Blue
Blueberries
Colourful seas
Beautiful sea skies
Writing
The NZ flag
A beetle, uniforms
Blue tack.
Blueberry pie
Tears and raindrops.

Lauren

Blue
The sky is blue shining in the atmosphere
Water is blue bubbling in your mouth.
Windows are blue shivering in the sun.
A screen is blue,
Waiting, excited to be used.
The ocean is blue with the fish
Leaping in the sea.
The smurfs trotting around their village.
Aqua, navy, turquoise.

Oliver

Brown
Branches of a tree
Burping elephant seals
Dirt under the grass
Sparrows that can soar
Wood that builders use
Hair that is so soft.
A table where you bring things to.
Bears that eat you!
Stalks shooting out of the apples.
Bark covering the ground under playgrounds.
A tree trunk connected to the earth.
The top of a whiteboard duster.
Coming third in a race.

Luca

Silver
Sharp swords
Dirty liquefaction
Shiny seals
Silver sun rings
Quiet elephants
Clear water
Silver curtains
Silver ocean picture frames.

Lachie

White
Sparkling snow
A dress of love, precious pearls
Clouds floating across the sky.
White is great.
Snow flakes shimmering in the sun.
A snowman slowly melting.
Seagulls soft feathers.
The moon smiling at you and me,
Giving wishes and baby stars to everyone.

Olivia

Orange
A sparkling bright pumpkin.
Fire burning at the moulty moon.
A juicy, crunchy carrot.
Marvellous, soft mandarins
Giant shining sun.
Beautiful, golden autumn leaves.
Bendy dry grass
Swooping goldfish.
Spicy fanta, huge oranges.
Brilliant safety cones and dazzling lights.
A monarch butterfly floating in the sunlight.
So is the colour of orange.

Thesara

Multicolour
Rainbows - the highest place in the sky
Eyes people have to see with
Tornadoes - the fastest thing that actually spins
Money to buy stuff
Puffles, the cutest pets on Club Penguin.

Caleb

The word clouds were made by copying and pasting the text of the poem into http://www.wordle.net/create

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