Children involved were :
Year 5 students
Emma
Julius
Thomas
Lydia
Samantha
Atlanta
Y6 students
Brydie
Jadey
Phoebe
Gemma
Nate
Ella
Adam
Jaeda
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Nettle
The misty grey morning
chilled the air when I was
walking on the dewy green
grass with a little tinge
of white. I could hear the
soft pattering of rain and the
small squeaky chirps from birds.
In the garden I reached over
and grabbed the wet handfuls
of lettuce.
Suddenly, pains started grasping my
skin, like rocks scarping repeatedly
on my arm.
The gloomy green stinging nettle
had briskly brushed against my
hand. The pain was everlasting,
like numbers going on forever.
The sky was swirling,
the watery plants blurring
screams of fright, sunlight
turning off.
Julius
A Penguin in the Amazon
As the flightless bird
wanders freely in the
humid rainforest, he is slowly
dying from not being in the
right climate. As sweat binds
on it's feathered
forehead, it waddles down
the Amazon River. Bullsharks
ferociously jump and try
to tear at the penguin
trying to take a bite
at the helpless bird.
It walks back up the bank
into the deadly forest.
Its orange feet are in pain
as it walks
across broken sharp sticks
and bark off trees like its
shattered dreams and memories
of home.
Nate
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